You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter,
• give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
• explain your accommodation needs
• ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing you to request some information about the course, accommodation and transportation. I am travelling on 5th august and I will reached Australia by 6th august morning. I have never been to this college before so it would be great if you provide few details on my query.
I have took admission in Advance English speaking course of six months. this course is of advantage for me in my future endeavours. I am very excited about my stay in college during my tenure. my requirement for accommodation are it should be ground floor and it would be really humble if it would not be on sharing basis. I need a accommodation where I can study without disturbance not much of noise, so it will prove helpful if its away from highway.
Another information is required from you is how to communicate from college and how to travel to college when I reach there. is college provide me any transportation or do I need to hire my own cab. if I hire a cab does that be reambresuable.
it would be grate if you provide me information as soon as possible. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Your Faithfully,
preeti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
... am travelling on 5th august and I will reached Australia by 6th august morning. I have...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eached Australia by 6th august morning. I have never been to this college before ...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f you provide few details on my query. I have took admission in Advance English ...
^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...rovide few details on my query. I have took admission in Advance English speaking c...
^^^^
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... English speaking course of six months. this course is of advantage for me in my fut...
^^^^
Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ut my stay in college during my tenure. my requirement for accommodation are it sh...
^^
Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t would not be on sharing basis. I need a accommodation where I can study without...
^
Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prove helpful if its away from highway. Another information is required from you...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...o travel to college when I reach there. is college provide me any transportation o...
^^
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...tation or do I need to hire my own cab. if I hire a cab does that be reambresuable...
^^
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tation or do I need to hire my own cab. if I hire a cab does that be reambresuable...
^^
Line 6, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hire a cab does that be reambresuable. it would be grate if you provide me info...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ab does that be reambresuable. it would be grate if you provide me inform...
^^
Line 10, column 86, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...on as soon as possible. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Your Faithfully, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94274534215 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7621482294 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8571428571 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177708147596 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630633727868 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539424369739 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922497710826 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213526591369 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.