We can see more disasters and violence shown on TV .What are its causes and what effects will they exert on the individual and the society?
It is irrefutable fact that crime and violent incidents are frequently telecast on television. Young blood would like to enjoy violence seen on the screen. There are several reasons for such a situation and also some circumstances which has been resulted due to this issue. Both the causes and circumstances are discussed in ensuing paragraph.
Discussing the reasons of the telecasting offences on TV, many examples can be put forward. The foremost one is that television channels want to increase their TRP (television rating point). If TRP of channel is stand on first, they can earn more amount than others. Therefore, the channels have to show such sensational news. Moreover, higher publicity is another reason of the same. They always try to attract their views using crime videos. Furthermore, the news channels have to show what happening around the society. Disasters and offences are very common in our surroundings. Finally, people demand that they should be well informed about all type of latest news. Thus, media has to show all its to viewers.
There are many harmful effects on the individual as well as society, which arises from the above mention causes. The most disturbing effect is on the child and youth. Fear level become high in children after watching offence seen. It makes bad effect on their mind for long time. Moreover, personal growth can decline. They can become aggressive. Thus, violence is main cause of changing nature of them. Additionally, It leads to accelerate rumors in the society. Because of it, environment of the community become more serious. What next, society can be aware about offenders and help police to catch them.
In conclusion, I pen down to saying that there are ample reasons why media shows too much offence on TV. Media should take care about negative effects on society and every citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07516339869 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57983924055 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1298280595 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.7307692308 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232095336541 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512940024311 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422801351492 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115915468987 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709439245868 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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