The government has decided to build a new airport. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the airport. Compare to the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new airport in your community. Use specific details in your response.
A new airport establishment is always good to a district since it provides a variety of work market to the locals including opportunities for technicians, electrical and engine engineers, design workers and flying crews, etc. However, the case is totally different when the airport resides in a residential neighborhood.
The advantages of having an airport in the neighborhood are quite implacable especially for travel intensive workers in the field of finance, auditing, marketing and consulting etc. Absolute convenience to reducing the travel time for both domestic and international destinations is that definite advantage. On top of that, having an airport nearby also means being convenient to public transportation lines.
The downside, however, may overwhelm the plus side. Living within close proximity to the airport, the residents will have to bear the noise pollution, health concerns, and traffic congestion posted by the airport project. Without a doubt, noise pollution top the list of people’s list of concerns. The noise origin comes not only from the construction and the daily operation from the airport, but also from the airplanes and the touching down noise when clashes the flight paths.
Despite aviation noise regulations, the legit level of noise would still irritate the habitants. Airport noise can place nearby residents at a greater risk for cardio vascular disease according the researchers. Studies found the risk was greater on the 2% of the population who were exposed to the highest level of noise. In parallel, Heavy airplane traffic can pollute the air for up to 10 miles away as in particular matter.
By and large, whilst the disadvantages of having an airport in the community notably suppresses the advantages of which, I would personally object to the new airport establishment project proposed by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
... overwhelm the plus side. Living within close proximity to the airport, the residents will have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, in particular, by and large, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01492295008 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0702297562 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215863549635 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689344423276 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728683007404 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133803575629 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785576714179 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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