Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away
-Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader
-Say nothing
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, teaching some students or be a leaderof a group are crucial duties in a society. So, teachers or leaders should be careful when they do their tasks. But, there may be a few mistakes during teaching or conducting people as a group leader. Some one prefer to cease the lecture and correct it right away, and some other people do not tell anything. However, I would rather do with another way rather than first two solution. In what follows, I will substantiate my viewpoint.
Firstly, teachers might say something wrong that they did not delibrately do that. So, we can correct their mistakes in a polite way. It result in their personality being saved. For example, I was a student in an university. I had physycs very Monday morning. One day, my teacher was solving an equation about material's acceleration. But, she forgot to wright weight force of material. After calss over, I went his room at the university, and told her about his mistake. She appreciated me because I did in a polite way. Thus, If I interrupted the class, it would cause negative concequences for her.
Secondly, correcting teachers' mistakes after class does not bring about negative results for students. Some one think if they do not warn the teacher about his mistakes, it would result in misunderstanding of students. In recent years, most of the classmates have group channel in the internet, or they have chatrooms connecting with eachother and their teachers. If a teacher tells something incorrect in the class, they can remember his wrongs, and after he solves it, they can share the correct one. Therefore, this can be compensated by this way, and the teacher's mostake cannot affect misunderstanding of students.
To conclude, when a teacher or a meeting leader say something wrong, we can warn them about their mistakes after the class or meeting is over, and not only this cause to save their personalities among people, but their mistakes also can be compensated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Someone'?
Suggestion: Someone
...or conducting people as a group leader. Some one prefer to cease the lecture and correct...
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Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...that. So, we can correct their mistakes in a polite way. It result in their personality being s...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...rect their mistakes in a polite way. It result in their personality being saved. For e...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... saved. For example, I was a student in an university. I had physycs very Monday m...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a polite way" with adverb for "polite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...stake. She appreciated me because I did in a polite way. Thus, If I interrupted the class, it w...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Someone'?
Suggestion: Someone
...ng about negative results for students. Some one think if they do not warn the teacher a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9186746988 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79592552136 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551204819277 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7376403426 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2272727273 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192796422832 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495384818041 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540541596059 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125947344862 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036097809987 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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