Technology has made our life easier and we lead a better life because of the advancement of technology. On the other side, and we were better before the latest technology has changed our lifestyle
It can be seen that technology has been advanced from beginning to end. With the development of new technologies. peoples life is now more comfortable then it was in the past, now we can not imagine our life without technology. our life is around the technology. Technology has its own pros and cons. Our life is easy now as compared to past. The main negative point is the environment. The main technology spoils the environment.
To begin with, technology has a way to advanced from hand blenders to food processors manual washing to automatic machinery, these appliances have made people's life faster. Technologies are helpful for working ladies with the new inventions people do not have much trouble in doing housework. The time spends on doing household work has reduced. because of this people can save a lot of time which is the most valuable asset in modern society. It is most helpful for those who are not like to do household work. For example cooking, washing, cleaning and other house activities.
Secondly, these technology increase used of electronic goods uses highly energy consumptions that leads to the rise in environmental pollution. Also, we have fewer sources to create energy. Such as fassil fuels and this source is very limetad. For instance one world environment survey . It has been observed that compared to earlier times, More amount of energy is consumed these days in doing housework. Therefore, it is a serious problem which needs to be addressed.
To sum up, modern appliances are invented to make people's lives easier to make people's life easier and they are successful in that, however, the cost environment has to bear overweights its benefits. therefore everyone should use law energy efficient appliances so it's very important to mAKE THE LIFE PF PEOPLE EASIER AND ECO-FRIENDLY.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08970099668 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80252193655 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9145521839 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6818181818 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243751115911 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669513346482 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774693601162 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134703887297 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097978369678 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.