Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Telivision is a stronger media to reach people. These days, we see every group of people, starting from lower income group to higher income group, everyone has a telivision at home. So, it can be used to reach and touch hearts of people. With all younger and educated population migrating to foriegn countries, and with homes where, both wife and husaband are working, telivision is that one source helping poeple to overcome their loneliness.Recently, it is also seen that, all politicians are using this box to influence people as to why they are right leaders to voted for. This small screen, is also seen as an oppurtunity for people to exhibit their acting and directing skills in a country like India, where not everyone gets oppurtunities to work in movies. With much lower budgets, a talented person soon becomes a celebrity, and the credit goes to "TV". It is also called by many as "idiot box", as it takes you into a new world, which deprives you from your social life. Any media, when used appropriately, will have its own value, and same applies for telivision.It has both good and bad effects and that depends on people who use it and not on what features telivision brings in. So, people are to be blamed or appreciated and not the innocent box.
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| 2019-09-26 | Agni | 84 | view |
| 2019-06-28 | chidrupeswari | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80542986425 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83309234506 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660633484163 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.3447829645 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0630148199317 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211840817647 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299840519356 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630148199317 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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