Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People who completely peruse their ideas and thoughts, irrespective of discrepancy or criticism others may express, are the ones who most probably leave a lasting legacy. I firmly agree with the above statement and my cogent reasons supporting my stance are discussed further.
The foremost reason is, confidence matters more than anything. If people are absolute, adamant and robust about their ideas then nothing is impossible. The confidence alone will boost them up to work hard and also galvanize them into action. And then, criticism and confusion of others will not matter at all. They will completely be focused on working and executing their idea until they see the positive results and failure or ineffective or undesired outcomes in rudimentary stages wouldn't enervate them. This attitude towards their idea and strategies help them to implement it correctly and hence, will lead them to success and at great heights. People who are unclear and dicey about their idea can never leave a mark in the society. This kind will get devastated after encountering a few failures during the process execution. They accept the failure easily and instead of doing something about it, they easily loose hope and change their main idea. They are overly sentimental about what people say and take their criticisms seriously, mainly because they don’t believe enough on themselves and on their ideas.
Secondly, people who spend quality and productive time in analysing their ideas, considering all the possible difficulties, and then draft them as accurate as possible, will make them stand out in a crowd. It will also help them to stand firm on their opinion and have a clear and deep understanding about their ideas. Moreover, it will aid them in not getting affected by other people’s ambiguity and humiliation. They can easily get through all the hurdles accounted in the midway and can answer to all the doubts raised by the others as they already have gone through all the possible scenarios beforehand. While, people who just directly start working without proper evaluation of their idea and the process of execution will stumble in between and unfortunately, they get nervous when questions are raised. For an instance, the prime minister of India, Narender Modi, when implemented the idea of demonetisation, didn’t realise the problems or difficulties beforehand and the ramifications of the decision led to undesired situations where he had to face severe criticisms.
In conclusion, having a clear picture of an idea or thought is really helpful in executing the same without any major problem. Anyone trying to make you wary about the idea or raise questions on its credibility, will not suppress your position. Clarity in the mind and confidence in yourself will make anything possible and will lead to an everlasting effect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ndesired outcomes in rudimentary stages wouldnt enervate them. This attitude towards th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22608695652 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75538654447 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563043478261 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 756.0 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1082836845 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.476190476 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181845898208 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579097531817 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679750214918 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140472226857 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100880472672 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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