Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The environmental issues have always been a controversial topic in this modern society when the environment’s quality becomes worse and worse over time. Following that topic, few people dispute that the major issue of our time is the disappearance of specific species of both plants and animals, while others argue that more significant environmental problems outweight the pre-mentioned issue. In my personal view, I think I firmly concur with the second argument.
On the first hand, some people believe that the environment issue mainly orbits around the loss of particular species of plants and animals. In some aspects, this problem could lead to some harmful results with the environment. For instance, the extinction of some species makes the natural food chain unbalanced which directly leads to starvation of some kind of prey in the natural. Permanently, this will cause the wide-spread dead among lots of species of floral and animals which may conclude morality in the future. Furthermore, the decrease in the number of species reduce the diversity of the universal natural habitat
On the other hand, lots of people strongly argue that there are more environmental issues needed to be tackle. Overview, people have to admit that there are a lot of factors destroying the environment such as environmental pollution due to economic growth, urbanization, deforestation. All of those problems are worth concern just like the extinction of species. Moreover, solving multitasking environmental problems can bring back much more positive results. Due to the co-operation of many governmental apartments, the issue of the environment can be more quickly solve with more effective impacts.
To conclude, although some people think that the major problem of the environment is the extinction of species of plants and animals, I am firmly convinced of the opinion that there are much more remarkable environmental issues that need to be tackled. I highly recommend that the government and civilians should join together to solve the multitasking environmental problems to make the natural great again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45592705167 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06535820901 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5995613696 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327928605533 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110657563613 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079868824373 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200374304393 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263155675075 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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