it is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is often true that giving support to all people in all nations is not a possible idea, consequently, I do believe that every higher authority in each nation should take care of their citizens. the reasons behind this opinion will be discussed below in this essay in more details.
initially, each government in any country has usually set a clear budget for helping their people, especially, if there were any disaster, they could substantially interfere immediately to save their people, however, the expenditure is a critical issue which always irritates every government in any country, they could arduously satisfy their people's need, to be precise, I would say that the funds for a disaster plan in one country are seldom to be satisfactory for the same country rather than to be allocated for helping different countries, such as, the recent earthquake in Indonesia, The Indonesian government has spent all of its financial premises to find a prompt solution to can save their own people there, although at the same moment there was another emergency on an island nearby its borders, but unfortunately; there was not enough money and manpower to can help its neighbor country, and they concentrate only on their people.
moreover, the quality of services in helping people might be declined significantly, if the government was allocating their help to other peoples in different counties. The reason is that the specified budget for supporting people will be divided into more than two countries, for example, when the usa government sent aids to Syria, Iraq, and Lebanon in the same time, they could not fulfill all their needs and there was also dissatisfaction among the usa citizen.
to conclude, I agree that it is possible for the government to could help their people and provide them with adequate services and supports rather than give hands to all other nations worldwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08974358974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75667112659 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.128960078 49.4020404114 585% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.666666667 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 20.7667163134 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27192653875 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148645484461 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750177044287 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179918433334 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284298152539 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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