the chart below show the percentage of water use by different sector in Australia and Sydney in 1997 and 2002007
The pie charts demonstrate how water was consumed for different sectors in Sydney and Australia within a decade between 1997 and 2007.
Overall, the use of water for the food industry was highest, compared to other sectors in the given period, while the opposite trend could be observed in the water consumption for the Building industry.
As can be seen clearly in the pie chart, Sydney and Australia consumed water mainly for Food industry, which accounted for 48 % in 1997 and this percentage dropped slightly by 7% in the next 10 years. In contrast, the figure for the building industry was only 5% in 1997 but reduced significantly by 3% in the following decade. The same downwards pattern goes for water consumption in manufacturing, which dropped from 15% to 11%.
When it comes to the upwards trend, the massive increase could be seen in the amount of water used for Service industry, doubling to 25% in 2007. Additionally. the use of water for the household purpose was 19 % and climbed slightly by 2 % in 2007.
- Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and What could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity? 78
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 73
- overpopulation in major urban center around the world is major problem, What are the causes of this? How can problem be solved. 73
- the chart below shows the annual pay for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004 79
- the chart below show the percentage of water use by different sector in Australia and Sydney in 1997 and 2002007 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...vice industry, doubling to 25% in 2007. Additionally. the use of water for the household pur...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... doubling to 25% in 2007. Additionally. the use of water for the household purpose ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86857142857 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69409993744 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554285714286 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0708695614 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259212220404 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131134098461 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956286231586 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18183896774 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880192444745 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.