Pollution is increase in 21 century what are it's causes and suggest some possible solution .
A significant rise observed in pollution in contemporary era. Both reasons and remedies will be discussed in this essay.
To commence with, several reasons are responsible for the issue. The first and foremost is, deforestation have increased the contamination in the environment. Due to this, an individual requirement will have soared because, they prefer to live in luxury lifestyle and use of wood as a: medicine, furniture and cooked food. The best epitome of this is, the Hindustan times had been conducted survey and examined that 6 out of 10 forest cut down by people. The another root cause is traffic congestion is plummet in the metropolitan cities. For this, if, pollutant particles has risen around the atmosphere since, most dweller suffer from harmful disease. Last but not least, an industries had rose smoke; it is responsible to filthy an ambience ecosystem. As a result, Human beings are faced detrimental impact by pollution such as: skin cancer, thyroid and night blindness. A good illustration of this is the Ludhiana is hub of factories; according to daily newspaper had been observed that 6 out of 10 people have died to breath problem in this city.
However, this issue is not insurmountable therefore suitable steps can be taken to curb it . The initial one is upsurge afforesation through awareness and campaign by social worker and media. The most contributing factor is car pooling will have controlled traffic. Another is , non smoking fuels have promoted to use in factories and prohibit to utilize dangerous chemical to make products.
To conclude that, government has taken step to mitigate issue of pollution in the society by committed law like, "Swach Bharat Abhimayan", and provide conservation to environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25886524823 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02794586469 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1655141674 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0749951596811 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232925842913 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331015343534 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503220444846 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386985681994 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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