3. Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views
It is often argued that increasing the number of sports amenities is considered the most appropriate methodology to facilitate public health. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that this way only exerts little impacts and proper health education would be the best method to help citizens.
On the one hand, there is a major factor why sports facilities improvement plays a certain part in facilitating public health. By virtue of participation of amenities that create more chances for dwellers to use these regularly, more people are enticed to go to local sports centre to take part in physical tasks and exercise. This phenomenon would result in the fact that the public health is significantly enhanced. For example, there is a trend towards yoga and meditation classes for people of all ages in society to engage in physical activities.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that this measure will only have short-term effects on people’s health and other solutions are required. When a new centre is opened with highest status devices, local residents are so excited that they go there on a daily basis, some even buy a monthly or an annual membership cards. However, many of they would completely fail to go there an entire month or year because they will soon get out of interests and give up. Furthermore, rather than invest in modern equipment, governments should concentrate their aim in raising people’s awareness about negative impacts of their bad habits. For instance, when they gain a deeper insight into pernicious consequences of smoking, they will be less likely to smoke anymore.
In conclusion, while some people think that more sports facilities should be raised to improve public health, I personally reckon that they should be provided enough knowledge on negative effects of habits and profound impacts of physical tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...e required. When a new centre is opened with highest status devices, local residents are so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17491749175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77798798887 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4515387642 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299918347526 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108417976383 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870807248162 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182766185555 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597103091342 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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