YOU HAVE A FULL TIME JOB AND ARE ALSO DOING A PART TIME EVENING COURSE. YOU NOW FIND THAT YOU CAN NOT CONTINUE THE COURSE.
WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR TUTOR. IN YOUR LETTER,DESCRIBE THE SITUATION,EXPLAIN WHY YOU CANNOT CONTINUE AT THIS SAY WHAT ACTION YOU WOULD LIKE TO TAKE.YOU SHOULD WRITE ATLEAST 150 WORDS.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to you with expecting to get your permission about my absent in your class.
Currently, I am working full-time for Unilever Company which I have joined since last month as a Sales team leader that a dream job with myself and i will try my best to keep this job which is not only bring much benefits but also I have chance to gain more experience from this work.
In facts, couple months ago I have seem "pocket burned" and owed six months the house renting, During that difficult situation, fortunately I have got this job which can bear that difficult problem for me.
I really apologizes for my absent, I have planed to return your next course in September this year - six month later - I promise that I have full fill all your requirement in your course.
Once again, I apologize for this caused by and to get your permission.
Sincerely your,
Stone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to you with exp...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...leader that a dream job with myself and i will try my best to keep this job which...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...o keep this job which is not only bring much benefits but also I have chance to gain...
^^^^
Line 6, column 36, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
... In facts, couple months ago I have seem 'pocket burned' and owed six ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 106, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ext course in September this year - six month later - I promise that I have full fill...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...get your permission. Sincerely your, Stone
^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... permission. Sincerely your, Stone
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6975308642 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51209892072 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6016365537 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22952166167 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11056977396 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525496626512 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121333859927 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628755989792 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.