Today, it is very common to have people from two different generations mix in the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
Nowadays, It is commonly see that different cultural people are working in the same industries which demonstrate the unity of people but, it has number of pros and cons of working two nation's people in a same place. My inclination supports the statement that working on a same place is far beneficial for learning purpose as well as understand different culture and attitude.
To commence with, I would like to outline the few advantages of working different cultural people on a same place that especially is worthwhile for native people to get some extra information from different people such as, chance to learn their languages, get information of their city or country's advantages and disadvantages, rules and regulation of different countries and many others. Additionally, one of the obvious advantage of is that people visit the country as well for tourism that eventually supports country's economy to some extent.
On the flip side, number of people believes that in many organization mostly international people holds the senior positions in organization due to quality of education and experience, hence after this environment is discomfited of large number of people. but, number of pedagogical experts believes that largely number of third world countries are existing in the world who are not enough qualified to run any organization in a good manner namely; Zimbabwe, Malaysia, south africa and others.
Last but not the least, many adepts assert that most of the people are facing language barriers that actually keeps far a way from each other that creates many adverse thinking in between employees for instance, usually it has seen that people an english man is working in german industry wherein they are facing languages barriers.
To sum up, working in a same place is an very good for the environment in a sence of learning. However, government and owner of the private sector needs to understand their problem as well, along with government need to form the criteria of employees in order to reduce the obstacles which is being faced by many employees.
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| 2019-07-05 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: seen
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Suggestion: many organizations
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is being faced by many employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, so, third, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 965.302439024 182% => OK
No of words: 340.0 196.424390244 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16764705882 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80744653651 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 106.607317073 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 283.868780488 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1665035876 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.222222222 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.7777777778 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 5.23603664747 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154960605484 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661879262935 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557715437108 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815395481437 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523444735793 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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