Advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day revels how technology have changed the lives of humans has been one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the pros and cons for our society.
To begin with, knowledge and science of humans have changed the way of living. Different inventions have their different advantages and disadvantages. New inventions have made our life smooth and enjoy full. Best inventions of today’s are antibiotics, internet, airplanes and many more are best inventions. Scientist new inventions and technology is giving us way to the different life and new technology.
Probing further, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. However today our science is very advance but our technology and inventions have many effects which effecting our life and earth. Cars and airplanes are causing air pollution and depleting our environment. Uses of chemical fertilizers in crops and food have gives birth to new diseases.
In conclusion, I would say we need technology and new inventions also but humans don’t know how to use this technology. Science will never stop it will continuously going further and do new inventions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ve made our life smooth and enjoy full. Best inventions of today's are antibiot...
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Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...tics, internet, airplanes and many more are best inventions. Scientist new inventions an...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ce will never stop it will continuously going further and do new inventions.
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly going further and do new inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02280379148 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7422382591 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15817391893 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579884608296 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428540181029 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945039018085 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408247897979 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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