You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,
give details of your study plans
Explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help your find a job.
Dear Jack,
Hope you are hale and hearty!
What's going on in your life? How are uncle and aunt? Actually, through this letter I want to discus about my new study plan in your country.
Let me to shed some light on this matter. First of all I want to share my happiness with you because I am selected in top most university of Canada for higher education. I have been trying for Waterloo University since last year to complete my master degree in hotel management course.
Secondly, not only the fees of university, but also the accommodation is very costly in this city. Owing to this, I decided do a part-time job. I'm having a keen interest getting a job, which is related to my studies only such as hotel manager
I remembered that moment when you told me by about your father's catering service business in one of hotels of Kitchner provinces. Also, he has a very good contact with so many owners of hotels there. Can you help me get a job one of these hotels with the help of your father?
Hope to see you soon.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: What's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hers catering service business in one of hotels of Kitchner provinces. Also, he h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe to see you soon. Best regards, Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43005181347 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3440313721 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683937823834 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3111692499 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7692307692 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266631603998 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086510096899 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766435126263 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136868520634 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440450777503 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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