Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
The assumption that arctic deer live on arctic islands and depend on the ice cover of the sea is flawed for many reasons. It could be very much possible that the deer could also live on the northern parts of mainland Canada, where they would have ample supply of plants they survive upon.
The argument assumes the deer population has reduced, based on the reports of local hunters which cannot be considered as a reliable source, It’s likely that the local hunters reported this dip in population during mating season when deer might move into more remote parts of the region.
It is not very clear the extent to which the deer depend on the ice cover over the sea, the Arctic “islands” that the author speaks of here could be large enough to sustain a considerable deer population throughout the year.
Finally, the author correlates the dip in population to the recent global warming reports. Although this could be one of the reasons, there could also be a variety of other factors such as, a recently conducted open hunting season, or a new predator introduced to the region. If the ice cover over the sea is indeed melting, this cloud mean that the deer are confined to a smaller area of land, which makes them more easily accessible to predators.
More substantial evidence from reliable surveys with regards to the declining deer population and its correlation with global warming patterns needs to be available before coming to any sort of conclusions. If the population is indeed declining, then it needs to be understood, if the deer are dying of disease, or if they are being excessively hunted, or they are being preyed upon by any newly introduced predators to the region.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 418 350
No. of Characters: 1962 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.522 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.694 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.359 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.368 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...y moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to a...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ich they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea sepa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, at least, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85885167464 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52834144721 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49043062201 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8133865472 57.8364921388 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.071428571 119.503703932 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 23.324526521 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40781998084 0.218282227539 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173897895823 0.0743258471296 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170887619153 0.0701772020484 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21157599207 0.128457276422 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179416036936 0.0628817314937 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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