You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
2. Explain why you must change your plans.
3. Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear Sanjay,
How are you? I hope you've been well. Sorry for having been out of touch for a short while. Last week, we had planned a trip to goa and very excited about the same! It has been more than a year when we went together for a holiday. However, There have been some changes in my life and I want to let you know the latest from my side.
The big news is that I have cleared NDA written exam and invited for a face-to-face interview on 23rd April. Unfortunately, it will be on the same day of our trip and need to prepare for this next round. I am very keen to join Indian armed forces and don't want any stone unturned during the preparation.
I will suggest postponing our adventurous tour to next week the 30th April; meanwhile, I will also get over with the interview process. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-F447D68A967815678CF0F89613C9629B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_249" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: A" data-pwa-suggestions="A" data-pwa-dictionary-word="By the way, A" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">By the way, A</pwa> positive result will bring a great treat for you and we can wander around small alleys and streets of goa together.
Please let me know your plans and I look forward to going together.
Warm Regards,
Yogesh Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sanjay, How are you? I hope youve been well. Sor...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
Dear Sanjay, How are you? I hope youve been well. Sorry for having been out of...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ry keen to join Indian armed forces and dont want any stone unturned during the prep...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55714285714 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.67262488849 2.54303337028 262% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695238095238 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.890273775 44.8134815571 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 97.25 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0894384901194 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472397755707 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648608327638 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799815347591 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688489005301 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.