Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon? How could the frequency of accidents be reduced?
With the development of vehicles and the improvement of roads today, there are more and more traffic crashes happening. In my view, this trend includes two main factors causing the problem: awareness of people in traffic and traffic volumes, which could be solved by several remedies.
As mentioned, the first culprit of traffic accidents comes from participants traffic who are specifically known to be drink-driver and other drivers of the vehicle. Driving while intoxicated is counted to cause the most serious accidents in the past few years. Moreover, crossing red lights and speeding are also the main reasons for giving the rise to vehicle accidents. It is also believed that understanding of vehicle issues is a pitfall of causing accidents. Particularly, when people to drive, they often focus on learning the manipulations or knowledge of traffic laws but ignore in-depth skills of detecting and responding to risks. For example, backfire or blowout when people are driving can cause loss of life to the drivers and vehicles circulating around. Second, a large number of people in traffic not only causes traffic jam but also causes many severe accidents. In addition, in the lane of cities, people tend to drive faster to wriggle out of this alley and when there are too many road users, they try to hustle each other, which easily leads to some fender benders.
There are several actions that governments could perform to alleviate the foregoing problems. The first, the fine for drunk drivers should be increased and traffic policemen should be requested to check alcohol concentrations of drivers more strictly. Furthermore, imprisonment should be punished with fatal accidents; therefore, people will have more sense and responsibility when participating in traffic. Second remedies should be taken is widening the road to reduce congestion. Especially, governments should open a separate street for pedestrians. Finally, people should be encouraged to use public traffic, which not only diminishes accidents but also address environmental problems.
In conclusion, although there is no panacea for controlling accidents, the mentioned issues will be mitigated if there are government support and the improvement of people's consciousness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 779, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45428571429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94514335606 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5490147472 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143155853356 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484338702368 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405334367666 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843232588528 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346644038639 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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