The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
The control on the rise in criminal activities requires dire attention. It is thought by a significant number of individuals that educating guardian superior parenting is the alone way to improve such conditions. Although teaching parent is an effective way to minimize the crime level in society, I believe that improvement in government rules and regulations can also be an effective way to limit felonious happenings.
Strict laws and rules is a more appropriate way to control the criminal activities in youth individuals thus, implementing fair regulations can create a panic between youngsters before carrying out any wrongdoing an activity. For instance, rules and regulations in the Arabic nations are stiffer as compared with the rest of the world so, the level of crime rate is very low in these nations. Hence, I believe that transparent and strong laws can illuminate such problems.
Children learn most of the things from their parents therefore, guiding the right things to the parent can also prevent the child to do an illegal act. Since birth, the new offspring stay with his family and learn different behaviours and attitude to follow. For instance, the Muslim kids learn to go mosque and do prayers from his father and the son will pass on to future legacy. Hence, I believe that guiding parents the right path can be an effective way to minimize crimes in society.
In conclusion, while, parent involvements in the upbringing of pupils are valuable and essential for the children to grow with better future, strictness in law and order is another way to inhibit youngsters from doing an unlawful activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 297, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tions in the Arabic nations are stiffer as compared with the rest of the world so,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81191811634 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6713698172 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18534199587 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682450497037 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582592968317 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116192155116 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425912226091 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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