Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology has been a boon to all of mankind. Our society has advanced as rapidly as the technology around both in terms of quality of living and productivity. Technology has not only made our lives more comfortable but also less complicated.
Due to advancements in technology, there has been a meteoric rise in the pace at which information travels. Gone are the days when a city dweller had to wait for weeks for his letter to be delivered to his old mother living in some remote location only for the letter to get lost or a trader to travel for months to another country to make trade but return unsuccessful. In today's world you can send a quick message with just a few clicks and with the help of video streaming a company leader can have start a meeting with any of his employees spread across the globe within seconds. These examples show the way technology has helped improve the way humans are able to communicate with each other.
Not only limited to increased communication efficiency, technology also helps deliver better better products to us and that too faster. One can order any item they need from a number of e-commerce websites. A person can check his bank balance, send money to a loved one or pay for a commodity all while sitting in the comfort of his home. With new technology all the hustle and busltle of running around and talking to one person or the other for some simple information has all turned into a quick Google search. This has made life far more comfortable than before.
Technology like any other resource should be used wisely and it how a person uses technology is totally dependent upon him. One can say that technology has disconnected people and made them machines hooked onto one or the other device. However, when used wisely and effectively the benefits of technology far overcome its harms.
In conclusion, there has not been a better time for humans to be on this earth and the credit mainly goes to advancements in technology that we have achieved. Techonlogy drives our society forward and gives us more time to care for the ones near and dear to us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...pace at which information travels. Gone are the days when a city dweller had to wai...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: better
...ficiency, technology also helps deliver better better products to us and that too faster. One...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68548387097 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60244349857 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6262859679 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.529411765 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121753204891 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462040865317 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818163421112 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819226503386 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860996434605 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.