fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this ?
From a period when we hunted and cooked for food, now we can buy preprocessed food in many shop. Some people believe that the fact of fast food are easier to prepare these days has definitely improved our life. However, other people say that fast food has some negative aspects. In this essay, I will least some advantages and disadvantages of fast food.
First, when people use a preprocessed food it definitely saves time. One does not have to spend much time in the kitchen washing, peeling, cutting and cooking raw foods, etc. All one has to do is just to buy ready-cooked food in restaurant and groceries. I think it is a very good benefit. People can do more their activities as they like spending time with the loved ones, such exercising, reading books, or watching television.
Second, it is a great opportunity to have a fresh cooked meal with excellent service, meet friends and new people, and gather with our family. Also, we can try to taste different and delicious food from over the world.
However, some people think that a preprocessed food has negative aspects. Unfortunately, preprocessed food has less vitamins and minerals than fresh cooked food. Besides, it has more preservatives and unnatural ingredient that can not be good for man's health. In addition, the number of diseases such as obesity, fatigue, reflux disease etc. is rising.
Cooking is a great tradition. It is a means of eliminating some dangerous effects to our health. Personally, I believe that people should not forget this tradition and do not abuse fast food.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ld. Nevertheles, there are some polemic as to whether the effect has been positive or negativ...
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...d to the negative side. First of all, fast food are contained of high sugar wh...
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... drinks. So, When we consume more sugar then we are less of physical exercise, our ...
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.... So, When we consume more sugar then we are less of physical exercise, our body ...
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...ess of physical exercise, our body will gets horrible impact later because we ate wa...
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...lthy one, but some of it are not because consuming a lot of it will be escalating...
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...fast food. At least they will gradually reducing their dependency of fast food. Every li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, as to, at least, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.904 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72633380201 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.209937913 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.625 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208849146426 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744306299947 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641471391477 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131415988581 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405418388323 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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