International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
Nowadays, travelling abroad become easier than before. Along with many benefit affected by travelling abroad, yet there are some disadvantages of it. This essay will discuss whether or not the international tourism bring positive effects.
There are several reasons why travelling abroad has become popular choice for people. Firstly, the tourists can spend their leisure time to visit many attraction places and scenery around the world. Whether people feeling stressful and do a boring job in whole day, they must be want to see great scenery, travelling can provide a much needed to escape from all these problems. One of the most attractive objects toward foreign tourists is architecture. The specific architecture in each countries brings enthusiasm and high satisfaction to the travelers when they visit these object. Other benefit from trip abroad that the tourists can learn more something new, such foreign food, culture, connection to native people, etc.
In the other hand, before and during the journey, the foreign tourists have to do many preparations in order to prevent some problems about the excess cost, travel documents and the security. Travelers must prepare variety documents that needed when they travel outside the country, such passport, visas, health check, etc. The important thing that travelers should to do is spending much money and time to prepare their trip. It is difficult for the low-income people to take a trip outside their countries.
To sum up, traveling abroad brings many fresh, exciting discoveries to tourists. Along with these benefits, the preparations are deeply necessary for a tourist for a healthy and safety trip overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...d become easier than before. Along with many benefit affected by travelling abroad, yet ther...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...vantages of it. This essay will discuss whether or not the international tourism bring positiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60776679525 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.986123524 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104475514378 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373500199619 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518243421372 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706741550545 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666982685377 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.