LIVING IN FOREIGN LANGUAGE COUNTRY
Adaptation is one of the important things in person life. Many aspects that encourage people adapting to their circle like attitude, habit, character, and language, but everybody would totally agree that language is the great weapon for adaptation and survive.
As we know, people will behave and speak based on their own variation culture and country. But when people go urban to another new places , they have to open self and accept change, especially for language which is the point to survive in life. People is a social organism with communication as alive sign. We will connect each other in communicate similar language.
In my perspective, I actually agree as long as the people can manage they speaking capacity in one frame language, they will feel save and comfortable. The people are holding the trust each other. Unfortunately for less capable person in speaking language where they are living in. They would get social problem because none of information can be transformed as huge as mistrust will be rose in their circle. I suggest that people must have understatement about the consequences of adaptation, so they can improve the language as well.
To summing up, enhancing language skill for daily life is extremely needed, and language is the key aspect of adaptation. Language also describes another aspects of ourselves, like the way we speak shows our attitude. How we choose our vocabulary in speaking describes our character. And what the things we always talk about also shows us our habit.
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- In some countries nowadays people prefer variety of foods Which are not grown in their local area So these foods are imported from other regions Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantage 92
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- many developing countries have welcomed foreign companies while others think that local businesses should be protected and supported instead discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...en people go urban to another new places , they have to open self and accept chang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.108 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70586276564 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6844238704 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112224698355 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397154046876 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573218625431 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065083650326 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245198882105 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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