"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?
Health is a vital aspect of human life and diseases could make it miserable. This essay agrees that people must take some initiatives to prevent diseases before their occurrence, the following paragraphs will explain the importance of it with intriguing facts.
First and foremost, vaccination done in first six months after birth cures a person from deadly ailments for rest of the life. Parents should take care of precautionary steps for their children's good health by providing them with all vaccinations, according to the schedule given by pediatrician so their children would not only lead a healthy life until later years but also money would not be squandered for any treatment. For instance, not more than ten cases of polio, measles or mumps have been observed in India since 2000, due to the successful vaccination campaign initiated by government in 1990 so it took approximately ten years to eradicate these diseases.
Secondly, active daily routine can be followed by people to fight with the diseases caused by sedentary life style. Human resources department should assign some mandatory workout hours, group activities and trainings to employees so that they burn some calories, otherwise, which would be quite challenging in a sitting job. For example, a report published by WHO in 2019 hypothesised that 40 per cent of workforce who are involved in sedentary jobs globally, are more prone to diabetes and hyperlipidemia and would invest lacs of money in the treatment, if not considered prudently on time.
In conclusion, although research and funding on treatments are important, people should focus on the circumvention of diseases because it would cost less and would beget more joy in people's life. They can adapt cost-effective methods of keeping themselves healthy such as vaccination as well as health trainings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...s caused by sedentary life style. Human resources department should assign some mandatory...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29931972789 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89989874732 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646258503401 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3645442571 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.8 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140284264281 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510439515989 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261226881507 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832240912608 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124384286753 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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