The charts below give information about the amount and types Of water in the world,
and also tell the use of water in three areas in three countries. Summarise the
information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons
where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the information of water. Two pie charts depict proportion of different types of water in the world and compare percentage of fresh and saline water. The bar graph shows usage of the water in three different country.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the part of fresh water is very negligible as compare to saline. Frozen water is covered maximum part of the total fresh water. Use of water in agriculture sector was between 30% to 50%.
It is manifest from first pie chart that a major chunk of the global water is saline water with 97.50% and the remaining (2.5%) is fresh water. The second pie chart shows that only 0.30% fresh renewable water is available on the earth. Underground water is triple with 0.9% in comparison of fresh renewable water. Almost third part is taken over by fresh underground water. Seven from ten proportion is for frozen water. From the column graph, we can able to analyse that domestic use of the water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada was at 10%, 5% and around 18% respectively. Egypt used only 8% water in industry and 40% in agriculture. Saudi Arabia consumed almost below than 20% water in industry and half water in agriculture. Canada used slight less than 50% water in manufacturing sector and third portion used in agriculture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and third portion used in agriculture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79555555556 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47256551924 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9930548019 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9333333333 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267376385377 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119418496296 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426507791956 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209401115268 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508546088009 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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