Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays many sports personalities are very famous and earn lot of money. Additionally, they are an idol for many people. They are also attracted to them because of money and fame they got. On the other hand, there are some other professionals who are famous for their work but do not earn that much amount of money.
Some people believe that they are unnecessarily highly paid. Other person who are also hard working, but they are not paid like them. For example, ISRO scientists who had done equal or even more hard work are not that much famous and do not get that much amount of money. Just because they are not famous, does not mean that they do not deserve money. Apart from sports, there are many other professions who are important for society. They should also have money or benefits for their work. If not then it will be an injustice to them.
However, I believe that every people get only what they deserve. These professionals are totally worthy for it. They have a great passion for their respective sport. In addition, they had shown dedication of it throughout their life. For example, M.S.Dhoni, a famous indian cricketer who was from lower middle class family. He had also done a job of ticket checker on a railway station to support himself and his passion. After all these struggles he was able to get in Indian cricket time. Now his net worth is around 100 million dollars which is a result of his patience, passion and hardwork.
In conclusion, sports professionals are only getting what they deserve. Neither they are trying to get more, nor they are getting it. It is a prize for their hardwork and they should get it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...throughout their life. For example, M.S.Dhoni, a famous indian cricketer who was from...
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...ion to support himself and his passion. After all these struggles he was able to get ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, after all, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65753424658 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.374984568 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8969896787 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8181818182 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2727272727 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148941588728 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542875611334 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504875936722 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104553400649 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458987029146 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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