Some people think that having poeple from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?
Nowadays, people from many developing countries prefer to migrate to other countries in search of better lifestyle and job opportunities and they also take their own cultural experience along with their skills in these countries. People from different races and nationalities may certainly work better together for betterment for a nation. This essay will discuss the different aspects of the given view and how does it affect a country.
In today’s world, even if a country is developed there may always be the possibility to improve things more and people from different nationalities may always suggest improvement ideas as per their own experience in their countries and work on them to get the best result out. People from distinct ethnicity always have a lot to share with each other and this also brings them closer, which is very essential for an ideal society.
Even though the idea of harvesting the people with different races and ethnicity in a country is captivating and has actually worked for many nations but there are certain setbacks about it as well and the biggest threat produces when people start to follow their traditions and beliefs rigidly. Such people lead the country backward and also caused a problem for their countrymen.
In essence, different cultures are very essential for a society and this is what makes make society inclusive and ideal for living. However, people can always ensure that they are only spreading great ideas for the advancement of the nation and refrain from spreading hatred. When all the great ideas from different races and countries come together, they’d lead the country to become a superpower.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17712177122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64486853819 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279221186732 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119832339812 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482654344871 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186495604398 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288483159511 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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