You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering
describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to you regarding the requirement of a teacher at the community college and the advertisement I saw in the local newspaper.
I have post-graduation in Microbiology. I am teaching environmental biology in the Science College at your locality during morning hours from 9:00 am to 11:30 am. I will be interested in teaching all the basic skills of microbiology as well as the use of statistics in the microbial population including practical which will help students to understand the basic mechanism of population study with different environmental factors.
Furthermore, I heard that you need a microbiology teacher during night timings and I am free at that time. I am also living in the same locality, therefore it will easy for me to travel to your college on my motorbike during night hours.
I hope you will understand my desire for teaching and allow me to educate students.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Alisha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you regardin...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have post-graduation in Microbiology. I am teaching environmental biology in th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...morning hours from 9:00 am to 11:30 am. I will be interested in teaching all the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with different environmental factors. Furthermore, I heard that you need a mic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ege on my motorbike during night hours. I hope you will understand my desire for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13664596273 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23403928069 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9674373511 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2579142759 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103690013596 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660281998178 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155392524365 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631131994705 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.