You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to, because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In you letter:
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I am offered a position of Finance Manager with your company. My joining date is agreed to be 1st August 2019. Firstly, I would like to thank you for extending this opportunity to work with your esteemed and renowned group. Secondly, I am writing this letter to explain my current obligations with my current company, which requires me to postpone my joining day by 2 weeks. I can begin my duties with your company by 15th August 2019.
Being Assistant Finance Manager, my current role entails responsibilities and acquaintance of historical background of underlying transactions. Further, I have put colossal efforts in the corporate audit assignment, through which, we managed to complete the audit for last 6 years holus-bolus. We are on the verge of finalization of this engagement any time soon. Due to some unavoidable circumstances on auditor’s part, eventually, audit got shifted by three weeks.
Considering my separation from company and with the active involvement of my senior management, my line manager managed to cut-short the timelines by 1 week on auditor’s part. As a last resort, my company has requested me to extend my services by another two weeks to have healthy and mutually beneficial separation, which seems reasonable to me. Lastly, considering this crucial situation, I ask you to please revise my joining date to 15th August 2019.
Hope you will consider it positively and extend your wisdom in this matter.
Yours sincerely
John Edward
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Finance Manager, my current role entails responsibilities and acquaintance of his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2489626556 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09505187124 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8594236193 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3571428571 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151217757188 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623430176504 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640305579264 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113793155025 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776497758162 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.