write a letter to the insurance company for lost product

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write a letter to the insurance company for lost product

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to intimate you regarding the lost of my cellphone on my recent Quebec city trip. My cell phone is under coverage on your company and please find the reference #INS455321 for the same.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. I bought the cellphone on one of the best Canadian service provider for 24 month contract on top of that enrolled the insurance for the same on your company. Last week i went for vacation along with my family and was bit busy on roaming the world's best street of Quebec and however, i didn't mind my cell phone on that time.Immediately after couple of hours was searching for my cellphone and came to know it has been missed,and tried to ring my phone from my wife's cellphone, but no luck and heard an message stating it's switched off. Furthermore, it has been around 13 months am paying the $13 as insurance, which will cover damage and theft. It will be great if you proceed my case in order to issue me an new device. Herewith enclosed the FIR lodged by myself in the Quebec city police station for the theft of my phone. I already spoke with my service provider regarding the SIM card and other formalities everything looks from their end. And they are seeking an approval from insurance company in order to issue me an new device. However am working in sales,you know how important an cellphone is for my profession.
It will be highly appreciable, if the request is processed immediately. Kindly let me know or reach me via email or text me on my temporary number +1 454 232 2456 for further details.
Regards
A.Sridhar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to intimate you...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for the same on your company. Last week i went for vacation along with my family ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...r vacation along with my family and was bit busy on roaming the worlds best street ...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
... family and was bit busy on roaming the worlds best street of Quebec and however, i didnt m...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ds best street of Quebec and however, i didnt mind my cell phone on that time.Immedia...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Immediately
...i didnt mind my cell phone on that time.Immediately after couple of hours was searching for...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
...hone and came to know it has been missed,and tried to ring my phone from my wifes ce...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
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... wifes cellphone, but no luck and heard an message stating its switched off. Furth...
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...rthermore, it has been around 13 months am paying the 3 as insurance, which will c...
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...ou proceed my case in order to issue me an new device. Herewith enclosed the FIR l...
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... insurance company in order to issue me an new device. However am working in sales...
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Line 3, column 1079, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...any in order to issue me an new device. However am working in sales,you know how import...
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Line 3, column 1087, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
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...rder to issue me an new device. However am working in sales,you know how important...
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... new device. However am working in sales,you know how important an cellphone is for ...
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...working in sales,you know how important an cellphone is for my profession. It w...
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...tant an cellphone is for my profession. It will be highly appreciable, if the re...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...er +1 454 232 2456 for further details. Regards A.Sridhar
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...232 2456 for further details. Regards A.Sridhar
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sridhar
...456 for further details. Regards A.Sridhar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, you know, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57240820062 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.9991071379 44.8134815571 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.076923077 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161149132749 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517563456903 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555563862467 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11841530885 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723838894762 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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