In many cities, crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce crime level?
Nowadays, the crime rate has taken a toll in many countries. Inhuman incidences are unacceptable, but Governments are failing in coping with the insanity of criminals. In my opinion, it is peak time to fix the human's vulnerabilities due to which, wrongdoings have hiked at a high pace.
Firstly, unemployment is a preliminary factor, responsible for the increase in heinous crimes. Not only jobless people are frustrated, but also they are enforced to commit crimes like thefts, rapes, murders out of allurance and self-disappointment. For Instance, many youngsters, who do not have full-time employment, steal cars in the lure of earning money easily. Secondly, Corruption in the system is another reason owing to which, criminals get more courage to attempt wrong activities, and still roam freely. To illustrate, many people charged with murders are proved not guilty in a court of law, as politicians support the criminal indirectly.
To cater to this problem, countries need to overhaul their internal systems. One, education system should be restructured so that every section of society irrespective of monetary status should get a proper education. For Instance, the government's school should provide quality education similar to public schools. Two, corruption should be dealt with in more stringent ways, to set an example for wrongdoers. For example, the crime rate is very low in middle east countries like Saudi Arabia, because criminals are penalized with a death sentence in public, owing to which people are intensely frightened there to commit any crime.
To recapitulate, both the government and public should take realize their responsibilities in maintaining a serene environment for the country. People should be more aware of wrong and right, and the government should be more responsive in dealing with crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39721254355 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09735128218 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5073326164 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123550449004 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410894179799 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403842934814 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765873017853 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0069662066631 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.