Many people are spending lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

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Many people are spending lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

In recent years many people are spending lot of money for their wedding. Some strongly saying as this is a onetime payments so it is good. Other parts of people strongly opposing the same. According to my point of view i strongly insist it is not good.
Majority of people believe disburse lot of money is necessary and it will show themselves in the public like they are well off. Moreover, they feel it as a prestigious one. Eventhough,if some people do not have enough money in hand, they are ready to arrange some finance or loans to showcase themselves. Recent case study proved that even young generations are outlay lot on taking some short movies using famous choreographers by losing lakhs and lakhs for a couple of minute videos. They are having some good reason to believe that marriage is once in lifetime.
In contrast to that some people strongly believe that expensing a lot on wedding is not going to show their ability. Moreover, it is not necessary to buy loans or finance for the same and put ourselves under pressure. For instance, in order to earn the excess money spent on that particular day, they need to work hard for couple of years, which will create some problems in family life. For those reasons it is better to employ as much as required and keep the remaining as savings on the names of couple.
Spending too much money on wedding is it really good?. Majority believe it's good to mandate and maintain their prestige. Others say it's really unnecessary and will create too much burden on future life. According to my point of view rather than spending a lot for one day function. Save as much and put it in your investment for the happy family run for the long rally

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...feel it as a prestigious one. Eventhough,if some people do not have enough money in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, well, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59868421053 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39132746025 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4113537742 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230225762863 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806213536065 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087629282023 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154991139098 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803514120746 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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