There are many people who go to live in different countries .To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose
What are the benefits and drawbacks of this.
In today’s world of L.P.G ( liberalisation,globalisation and privatisation) the trend of migrating to other countries has escalating dramatically.This phenomenon has ample number of advantages like culture intermingling, personal development while, detractor of this notion believes that it is hazardous for cultural identity and leads to brain drain dramatically.I personally believes that demerits of this phenomenon have an edge over merits,these will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs of the thesis.
The cultural intermingling has been rising rapidly, migration is the notable cause beyond this scenario.Migrate to other countries give a chance to an individual, they can explore other cultures and languages.Consequentally, the misunderstanding among cultures dilute,which leads to patience in society.But on the other hand, not to forgotten that,emigrant to other countries are gruesome for cultures identity.In the shadow of foreign cultures, emigrants start forgetting own cultures.So this is a big disadvantage to cultures and religious.
globalisation has provide a golden opportunity to people, they can choose any field around the globe and they able to pursue their career in desire field. Although this is beneficial for individual but it is a big loss to country in the form of brain drain.If, the talent of one country is migrate to another country this is dent to the development of underdeveloped countries.Nowadays, professional of different field such as engineer,doctor,player,lawyer shifting to other countries because to enjoy a better living standard.Therefore, this is unfruitful for native country.
To conclude, it can be said that living in another country is provides not only a chance of explore other cultures but also provides an opportunity to select own dream field. Whilst, there is no doubt that, this promotes brain drain and due to this many cultures on the verge of extinction.I believes that its disadvantages have an edge over advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76351351351 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.10134021994 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.80477141 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.333333333 106.682146367 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164222176966 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877591961712 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503231775133 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107037394436 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481253579462 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.82 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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