These days it is more convenient and easy to make food. Has this advancement enhanced the way individuals’ life Comment?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals these days it is more convenient and easy to make food has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the more convenient and easy way to make food. Regarding this. I would like to say that it has no deniable fact that it is really easy to make food and this advancement enhanced the way individuals life. Let's delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
One compelling argument in favor of my stance on this issue has to do with the fact that these days it is really very easy to make food because people are not free and they have no time to make it so they are basically used a machines which used only for food. This is because, technology spread everywhere and every work done by it in a second. As a result, masses who are living alone and they can not make a food then this is a better way for them to make food individuals. To, put this into a perspective, in every home people like to stay alone or make a food just for them.
Furthermore, India is a big country and everyone's are depends upon each others. Moreover, most of people do not like to make a food by self because they have no time and they are also busy in their daily routine .
Hence, based on the arguments above, we can concluded that it is more convenient and easy to make food and this advancement enhanced the way individuals life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, so, then, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42657342657 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48995115258 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.24108231 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473529575865 0.242375264174 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177001482855 0.0925447433944 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150975921386 0.071462118173 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320594143178 0.151781067708 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186010111381 0.0609392437508 305% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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