some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and the diadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Nowadays, providing a large number of toys to entertain the children becomes is widely practiced by the parent. There is a certain benefit to supply a wide variety of toys for the youngster, however, the negative effects are worth to consider.
I presume that providing several numbers of toys to console the children is highly beneficial for children since nowadays, numerous playthings are designed for educational and child development purpose. Take Legos, for instance, it could demonstrate both their imagination and mathematical thinking by developing symmetry, balance, shapes, and sizes tower or building. Another example is origami, the youngster who plays with it could stimulate their creativity by learning to fold and forming a paper based on the pattern. Moreover, it also highly advantageous for their psychology such as training patience and finding a solution. Consequently, the children who play with these kinds of plaything are smarter, persistence and do better in term of problem-solving compares to their peer.
Despite the advantages, there is some drawback to have too many toys. The gravest problem of this case is children become anti-social. They prefer playing in the home using provided-toys to playing with their friends. For long-term, this attitude could have a bad impact on their personality. Moreover, common plaything used by children these days are designed to play indoor, such as video games and train set. It could lead to inactive behavior. As a result, it could affect their health such as child obesity.
To conclude, I believed that supplying a variety of toys for the youngster is highly recommended as long as it has benefit for their development. However, the parent should ensure that the children have sufficient time to socialize and doing an outdoor activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Nowadays, providing a large number of toys to entertain the children becomes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, moreover, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34494773519 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91495434052 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8541171813 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389033751016 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111641118687 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079639567168 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228235106592 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356806686675 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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