You are due to start a new job next week but you will not able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
-Explain your situation
-Describe your problems
-Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this email to request reschedule of my starting day which was on May 26th, 2019 for one more week, as I had a car accident yesterday. Last night, I had been driving on WES street before being crashed from other drunk driver. Fortunately, I had no injuries, nevertheless, my car being totally lost.
The police officers asked me to come on the next Wednesday in order to make an official claim against the other driver in terms of being compensated by the insurance company. Meanwhile, some legal papers that related to that accident should be finalized this week.
Therefore, I would be extremely grateful if you could amend my starting date to 10th of June, until I completely settle down everything here and be ready for the job. Nonetheless, I will be so happy to start the product training. Thus, you are kindly requested to send me the training materials by email
I await your prompt response, and please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience that this delay made.
Best regards
Bilal A.Nabbout
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this email to request resch...
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...evertheless, my car being totally lost. The police officers asked me to come on ...
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...accident should be finalized this week. Therefore, I would be extremely grateful...
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Suggestion:
... send me the training materials by email I await your prompt response, and please...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any inconvenience that this delay made. Best regards Bilal A.Nabbout
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that this delay made. Best regards Bilal A.Nabbout
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nabbout
...elay made. Best regards Bilal A.Nabbout
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93296089385 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70810884202 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72625698324 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1209012361 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123947973446 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433558350966 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045415375148 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069061714527 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526263735828 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.