Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or determined to society.

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Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or determined to society.

Surely there was no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day revels. Any recent invention that you think proved has always been of the present topic in the contemporary discussion people have always been intrigued to analyze and explain regarding this I would say.
To begin with, now day’s scientist gives the new invention its cell phone. It is very benefices for every person. Now these days any one person uses the cell phone because cell phone is one fast technology and surfing the internet. There is merits use of mobile phone. And it helps any trouble time and any difficulty.
Moving further, cell phone gives the internet for searching any kind. Cell phone always attracts with social media for read newspaper any time and lessens the news or watches other cannel. Cell phone gives the map for search location. With the help of cell phone send the message in seconds any place or any country. According to me cell phone is very beneficial for any person because cell phone are play big roll of study with the help of internet search the information of study.
Overall conclusion, cell phone is very high technology and cell phone is change the lifestyle of every people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...ith, now day's scientist gives the new invention its cell phone. It is very benefices fo...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'There are merits'?
Suggestion: There are merits
...st technology and surfing the internet. There is merits use of mobile phone. And it helps any t...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ge in seconds any place or any country. According to me cell phone is very beneficial for any p...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s change the lifestyle of every people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, second, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37369558432 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8397180145 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147827627231 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540300718674 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695419218436 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879117974585 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652602561814 0.0609392437508 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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