Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day revels recent inventions it has b one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze.
To commence with, there are number of reasons which assert that computer is indeed the most important invention. First and foremost, in all fields whether it is science or medicine, computer has significantly helped in more efficient way. For instance, with the advent of computers , it is now much easier and faster to work and that too with minimal error. Hence , there are numerous reliable ground to support the belief that computer system has greatly helped mankind.
Furthermore, computer also helps in automating the task which drastically reduces the monotonous repetitive task. In office, it has immensely helped a lot by computing complex task in simpler form. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertaken by the prestigious university has asserted that computers are used in every department of office. Therefore, it can be concluded that it is indeed much beneficial to societies.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that computer makes work faster and efficient in office and in any workplace. Therefore, i would strongly recommend that nowadays without computer we cannot even think of progress and is one of the most important discoveries for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k and that too with minimal error. Hence , there are numerous reliable ground to s...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...office and in any workplace. Therefore, i would strongly recommend that nowadays ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34210526316 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93359396219 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3717249213 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.059777375864 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202921102214 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335332346438 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378373327398 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276054830081 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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