The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The development of an island before and after construction is shown in the maps. It is evident that there was a noticeable change in the island where the tourism facilities has been developed, and dominating the island.
There was not any significant change in natural aspects of the island. The shape of the island has not changed likewise, and the coconut trees remained intact, however, the coconut trees in the east area has been surrounded by buildings. This contrasted to the west part which is still undeveloped. Moreover, a swimming area has been established in the western beach.
In the middle of the island, there is a vehicle track connecting three main buildings. Starting from the pier, the track links to the reception and the restaurant. There are some bungalows located in the west and east of reception building, and each bungalow is connected with the footpath. Additionally, the footpath also connects the west bungalow to the beach
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 61
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What problems do this cause? What solutions needed related to the issue? 56
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 56
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both of views and give your own opinion! 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05696202532 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78892819798 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1539163201 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169548119438 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670770102966 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101923460139 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131262558348 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125226025357 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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