The graphs below show the number of visits to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999, and some destinations of UK citizens traveling abroad.
The graph and bar chart show/present /illustrate/ the numbers/figures of people who visited/ visiting the UK and the number of UK citizens who travelling abroad, and some of the places the UK citizens traveled to while abroad.
The graph and bar chart illustrate the figures of people visiting the UK and the number of UK residents travelling overseas from 1979 to 1999, and some of the places the UK citizens traveled to while abroad.
Between 1979 and 1999 there was a marked increase in the numbers of people both traveling to and from the UK. In 1979 there were approximately 11 million people who visited the UK but by 1995 this number had more than doubled to about 26 million and has remained stable. There were approximately 16 million visits abroad by UK citizens in 1979 and this number since then has increased steadily, reaching 55 million in 1999.
According to the bar chart, the numbers of people traveling from the UK to certain countries had risen after 1979 apart form Ireland which had a downturn of about 50% from 750,000 to 400,000 visitors a year. The greatest proportional rises can be seen in the West Indies and Thailand where the numbers increased fourfold in twenty years. Spain, France and Greece all had high numbers of visitors in 1979 yet they all increased their totals in the following twenty years. The most popular destination in 1979, Spain, remained so in 1999 receiving almost 4,500,000 tourists in that year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and bar chart show/present /illustrate/ the numbers/figures of people who visite...
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... UK citizens who travelling abroad, and some of the places the UK citizens traveled to whil...
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...velling overseas from 1979 to 1999, and some of the places the UK citizens traveled to whil...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
... certain countries had risen after 1979 apart form Ireland which had a downturn of about 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85887096774 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60392411288 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4085337421 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.888888889 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.563098482047 0.215688989381 261% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250689424198 0.103423049105 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188986381687 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.408561290063 0.15604864568 262% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15481701275 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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