In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well?
Tourism means visiting different place’s from away their residence of leisure, relaxation, fun and enjoyment. Now a day’s tourism become an industry, however some developing countries economy is mainly depend upon tourism. Under developed country are also getting benefits from tourism.
First and foremost is that it boosts up the economy and developing of infrastructure and popularize of country. Every country wants to become economical stronger. As underdeveloped countries economy is not much stronger as compared the developing country. Their tourism industry can support the country to boosts up economical conditions. Furthermore, as people from another country visit tourist place and foreign exchange will be increase and there will be more flow of money.
On the other hand, tourist initiates the need for the developing of infrastructure and service. Government tries to provide the best service to tourist, by bringing in improvement in road connectivity, timely transport service, more airlines service’s and better railway network.
In addition, increase in the tourism in the country creates a brand value of the country. As TAJ MAHAL comes in the seven wonder of the world it further popularize INDIA.
To conclude, I would like to say tourism plays a major role in developing countries. Moreover, there should be more security of tourists and exploitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62085308057 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05371452342 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6355770103 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7142857143 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145818184623 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505669299828 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422877835726 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779729815848 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501556613302 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 79.0 Out of 90
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