Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are interested in. To what extent do you agree?
While it is thought that adolescents ought to focus on a broad range of school subjects, and others think that it would be better for the teenagers to learn a specific subject which they have an an interest. So this essay shall analyse both the view points along with the lucrative conclusion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, the teenagers of 10 to 16 age group are physically and mindly immature so they do not have a proper understanding about the specific subject which they find more interesting. Therefore, every types of subject is compulsory for the students in the school because it would help them in their upcoming future. Secondly, these types of all subjects have an a vast amount of information which helped a student as there is sports subject for the health and math to be able to do simple arithmetic in life as well as they need language subject improves their communication skills as these subjects helps to enhance their interest and understanding ability in the future which often change as a child ages. At a young age they are not mature enough to be responsible for their own development.
However, by the age of 18 adolescents now not only what subjects they most enjoy or excel at, but also which subjects is useful in their future life. For this, most of the university applicants are 18 because in this age they deeply know about their interest. So, they have an a specific subject at this age , unlike when they were younger. Lastly, older adolescents have an ability to take responsibility for continuing art or sport as a hobbies.
To conclude, after a many thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that every teenager should learn the wide range of subjects but when they get 18 so they have a clear understanding of specific subject. The teenager should starting to make the career according to that interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78287461774 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71535282929 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510703363914 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1350280406 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300598781945 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120390980995 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777105000638 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20192959257 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511967356289 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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