Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give more prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is true that in order to mitigate criminal activities, a longer prison sentences would be given to ensure crimes not to infringe again. However, I contend that this is not the only way to reduce illegal activities, because there are alternative measures which would also effective.
On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people’s awareness of what they are acting in daily life, which is right and which is wrong. In others word, prison sentences for dangerous crimes might lead to the fear of losing their freedom, the most valuable things or even losing their sense of purposes in life. The aim of these punishments is to show offenders that their actions have grave long-term consequences. Therefore, the longer imprisonment is, the stronger defense it becomes to protect society from illegal activities, particularly dangerous ones such as murder, assault.
On other hand, I believe that several different ways could be taken into account to tackle these potential problems. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people’s horizon than simply to send them to jail. Some young adults in the age of 15-23, for example, are unable to define their behaviors are appropriate or not with social norms, they are likely to imitate violence which appears on TV and violate the laws. Secondly, the majority of criminal acts are result of poverty and unemployment, thus, some measures that governments need to carry out is creating more jobs and enhancing the quality of human’s life. If they can do this, the percentage of offenders will be reduced and society becomes safer than ever.
In conclusion, while imprisonments can help to prevent illegal activities, I believe that other measures that I mention above are also necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19791666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78927957298 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3190912454 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132350730517 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446466276983 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418455197016 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786920708937 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539537850897 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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