Nowdays ,many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children centers provide the best care . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the era of 21st century both parents working become a trend. Few parents are prefer to other family members like grandfather and grandmother for take care of their children .But some parents instead of believing on other family members insist to admit it in modern childcare centers.
While I agree that , people should need to believe on other family members because our grand parents knowing as very well and children easily cope and mixed with them .
Childcare centers are expensive and number of children is high their.caretaker do not have much time to single- single hang out with all children.
Private caretaker work only for money and have not any blood relationship with kids.instead of it family have a blood relationship .Along with all these advantages one another behind believing on Grand parents is ,they teach some valuable habits and give guidance to our children.which helps to make children more censior person.
In conclusion because of both parents working children have negative impact .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19512195122 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66325064767 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0859157817 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393868034792 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197874748573 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911564791283 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213160508817 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114861459849 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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