In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem? What measure can be taken to solve it?
These days, the practice that a deterioration in the basic enjoyment of life in metropolises has received much public attention in today's society. this trend poses several serious threats to many nations, and it must be addressed by a some definite actions.
There are a host of cogent reasons to which the worsening of the general condition of living can be attributed. One principal reason worth mentioning is the daily influx of people from the outskirts to cities. In reality, many believe that mega cities such as Beijing and Shanghai are often bombarded with the omnipresence of job opportunities, they are more inclined to frequent a trip to urban areas with the sole aim of moving up their career ladder. The consequence of this is that this may in turn act as a catalyst for the degradation of the quality of life, in a sense that a wealthy city would face the domino effect of overpopulation and prohibitively expensive cost-of-living. besides that, the social interaction between people in big cities has gradually been brought to the verge of dying out. it is undeniable that in light of the proliferation of modern technology, citizens would eschew communicating with their neighbors in favour of living on the internet. therefore, they could be reluctant to share their own thoughts and mutual interests, leading to an indifferent to others' emotions.
As a result, lacking a sense of community as well as the feeling of insecurity may be the main culprits of an overall drop in the quality of life in overcrowded cities. Some possible measures can be taken to alleviate the problem of the decrease in the quality of life. Promoting the construction of satellite cities is at the core of the solution. Government ministers should be instrumental in forming an impassable barrier between cities and the suburbs. If such a measure is implemented, societies may curb the mass migration from outlying areas into the inner cities. For example, in 2020, Ha Noi will sway people to move to outlying districts while improving their infrastructure and public transport, which can be ideal vehicle for the deterrence of those who have the intention of residing in large cities. besides, the most sustainable solution is to spur people to interact with each other. people are swept into the maelström of work, therefore, social events and games would help them ease the stress that city life often brings. As a result, most likely it would be a contributor to the improvement of the quality of life in the long term.
All the existing data has laid a concrete foundation that the poor condition of life derives from the massive migration of provincial citizens and a lack of communication between people in municipalities. Strong measures, such as making use of satellite cities and encouraging people to engage in social activities, are the cornerstones of tackling this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 41.998997996 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 479.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03131524008 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97688762161 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534446764092 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1410759757 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.95 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222735502686 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652514058651 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677461662416 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120134360237 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574506618817 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.