More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
More and more students have travelled abroad to study at college and university these days even though they make might experience some bottlenecks in a foreign country. In my opinion , studying abroad can bring about much more benefits for students compared to any drawbacks it might bring.
Admittedly, there are a few drawbacks of studying abroad. Firstly, some students may have problems with paperwork such as visa applications. Secondly, living away from home can be challenging because some students have to find accommodation themselves and pay the bills monthly without the financial support from their family. Thirdly, a number of students may experience culture shock due to the huge differences between the two countries. These troubles also cause their homesick feeling and thus they miss their family much more . Another issue is the language barrier. A minority of students, for instance, may find it difficult to express themselves in a foreign language as well as understand the native speaker' slang.
Nevertheless, despite the drawbacks above, I believe that studying abroad can bring about far more benefits for students . The main benefit is that students can choose to study at a pretigious university.
Obviously, the best universities will employ lecturers who are experts in their field. Therefore, qualification gained in famous university abroad can help students open doors to better job opportunities . Another benefit is that living in another country can broaden students' horizons. For example, oversea students are exposed to different cultures and customs so they might easily have a better understanding of the new area, the cultures as well as the people where they are living in . In addition , students abroad can immerse themselves in a foreign language. As the result, they can speak a new language naturally without much effort.
In conclusion, the better job opportunities and broadening horizons far outweighs any minor disadvantages that could result from studying abroad.
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- More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 67
- More and more students are choosing to study at college and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44871794872 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88527110815 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548076923077 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9059038748 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390567416387 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125266810943 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127787872706 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252960996163 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158850113677 0.056905535591 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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