The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?
In the current scenario, the world has been suffering from many disturbing issues; however, an ever-increasing crime rate which is committed by youth needs to be controlled on priority, although it is argued that the best appropriate approach to resolve this issue is to educate youngster's parents on the breeding skills. I believe that in addition to this aspect, the bureaucrat also plays a crucial role in properly tackling this menace.
To begin with, today's young generation observe and inculcate the way their parents live their lives. To be more precise, it plays a pivotal role in terms of how do they behave with their child? how do they teach their child about morals and values of life? Moreover, parents could restrict the company from their child to friends to make them aware of certain anti-social activities and keep them away from it. Nevertheless, this is not the only solution and may not reduce the rate of crimes which are committed by youngsters up to the mark.
Admittedly, the conscious efforts by both government and parent play the more indispensable role. The enforcement of stern laws and strict legislation would not only punish culprits but also sensitize other young offenders. Furthermore, indeed this key measure would curb incidences of petty crimes, organized offenses, severe felonies and many more. For example, the introduction and execution of rule number 370 by the government of India in 2017, for the people particularly youth who committed fraud, robbery, smuggling, has decreased the number of crimes in the country.
In conclusion, while the burgeoning of the crime rate by adults is a burning issue in front of the globe, which needs to be tackled for a better future generation. The development of the upbringing skills of parents is necessary, undoubtedly this is not only and best way. I believe that the government plays an incredible role along with a parent to reduce the rate of crimes by youngsters.<br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08978328173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83613637637 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5101216294 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259613707634 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850447115384 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748866373873 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151952795999 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597582744696 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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