Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
- Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
- Explain why you didn’t write earlier
- Invite them to come stay with you
Dear Ana and John,
I’ve just receive the pictures you sent me about my holiday last month when I had stayed at your home. They recall the fantastic time with you that I could never forget.
I intended to notice you immediately by arrive, however, unfortunately, I got an accident when I was coming back from airport. The taxi driver was not careful enough when crossing the road, at the same time, a bus was coming. I had to stay in the hospital for three weeks and just back to home last week.
I really appreciate your kindness and I would like to invite both of you to come to my house and stay with me for some weeks. I suggest that upcoming summer could be suitable because I will finish my project that time and moreover, the weather in summer always good for swimming and fishing.
I hope to see you soon.
Again, thank you very much.
With love,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... house and stay with me for some weeks. I suggest that upcoming summer could be s...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... always good for swimming and fishing. I hope to see you soon. Again, thank you...
^
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Again, thank you very much. With love,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.425 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2607728214 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8542876792 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320632332987 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119345186852 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863068659169 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177011349227 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875095663008 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.