The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my grievances regarding garbage collection in my area, Bedok South Avenue. Over the last few weeks the garbage collection van, which would collect the trash daily, has become infrequent. Sometimes they do not arrive for days consequently causing the rubbish, especially bio-degradable waste, to rot and reek foul odor.
Let me explain in detail. Firstly, due to the onset of monsoon it is absolutely imperative to dispose off trash regularly in order to avoid it getting pilled up. Since the garbage van schedule has become irregular, our neighborhood has become smelly and inhabitable to live. Secondly, the rains wash away the garbage into the nearby drainage system, thus resulting in flooding during excessive rains, for the drains have been clogged. Lastly, the has been a spike in the number of rats and and other insect infestation, that was not prevalent earlier.
Keeping our situation in mind, I would you please take immediate action and ensure the garbage is collected daily. Furthermore, we request you to please clean the drains and also conduct fumigation in our area.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... has been a spike in the number of rats and and other insect infestation, that was not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22164948454 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69088457855 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711340206186 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1382628559 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209403713827 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634815543343 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456225077587 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108387650364 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443534103169 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.